The art sucks, but the writing and animation make up for it.

This is awesome.

Great action animation, but the art could be better.
There is also a lack of frames that really makes the animation suffer at certain points.

It's a good lip-sync, but this doesn't belong in the flash portal.

You sound like my friend kyle.

I like my friend kyle, 10/10

arm with the purse is to long, one tit is deformed, somethings off with one of the hands. The way the knees are positioned it kind of reminds me of one of those nurses off silent hill. Other than that gr8 job

Way to improve!
But do life drawings and you'll improve faster :<

Oh man, looks like i've got some actual competition, just don't push your luck, 2nd place.